I also wrote two stories that parallel Maddeleine's experiences. I worry about covering the same issues as new characters are introduced to nudism, but I do like the idea of one person sharing her ideals and watching them grow exponentially as she encounters new people. I have not decided if I will publish the second story or not. I apologize to anyone who felt some items were left dangling. Ultimately, I decided to break the story into two. I grew concerned that the story was too long and that some characters from the original story faded out as new characters joined the story. It took her through college and her summers working at the nudist resort. Madeleine's story was originally much longer. It made me laugh because this person is absolutely correct! A reviewer on Amazon felt this story rushed to its conclusion and left some things unresolved.
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